The Free River

As the wind blows in a very low grumble;

I watch as the river fiercly rumbles.
I wish that maybe, someday soon per say;
I could become a fish and just swim away.
For the life I live and the troubles I face,
wish things could go smoothly, at a walking pace.
But no, not I, who runs to fast;
and doesn't have time to face the facts.
So I'll be a river whom is smooth and graceful;
And never as I have too much to handle.
So I'll be myself and just let free...
But I first must discover, the real, true me.


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by: Bee

This is so good :)
Im a poet myself and i also can relate to this poem :)
Amazing wording and imagery :)
Im only 15 and i can see that this is a total work of art :D
May peace and god be with you.

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